50 Cent

Re: Re: Re: Crush..

niggau can have more damn posts then me dat jus means u are more of fuckin faggot who dont leave the computer nigga u white u no it i no it and u better never talk bout me like tha again aight nigga i aint playin i dont play games use a jus a bitch okay ill kill u for real playboy dont fuck wit me

Re: Re: Crush..

bezdabank wrote:
dat was da gayest shit i hear din my life who da fuck says am a gangsta fa true so that mean before I crush you-I rather Jump In my hoopty and Just rondaivou nobody says dat shit all yall wunnabe gangstas from the suburb stop tryin to ryhme and use the slang from the hood u cant talk og okay dat shit was wack as fuck even fitty wouldnt say dat shit and he always says gay shit in his ryhmes

ok ok ok ..

rhyming aint for you spins, your a kid with a false image, what you need to do is go back to school and improve on your vocabulary, its horrible! and just be yourself. It seems to me your heading into a direction thats not yours. you dont pop off, you dont rob, your a good kid, we all know it hahaha.. live your life kido leave the gangsta shit to the gangsta guys..


on that note .. heres some of my old ish you can ride to..

feb 26, 07 11:30pm
Az – the come up

camcorders rolling, bright lights an em auctions
fly kites from an orphan to closing coffins
gotta cough be cautious, gotta off the poison
with a mind embedded, where the lines invented
gotta rhyme spit venom, till the dimes equal living
till I shine with these visions, maintaining yah
selfish cause, stress letting off
got a extra thought, absolutely etching for
a garden filled with digits with the laws assistance
until my foes break down into morals an riches
it’s like the lord in a coma an found his spirit
I’m similar to them both, I’m death hooked on living



skep.

Re: Crush..

dat was da gayest shit i hear din my life who da fuck says am a gangsta fa true so that mean before I crush you-I rather Jump In my hoopty and Just rondaivou nobody says dat shit all yall wunnabe gangstas from the suburb stop tryin to ryhme and use the slang from the hood u cant talk og okay dat shit was wack as fuck even fitty wouldnt say dat shit and he always says gay shit in his ryhmes

Crush..

{shyne's instrumental- playin ya know Shyne Po- Shyne (swizz beatz instrumental) yeah that one
Go go go go go -- G-unit

Crush ice all over ya body-Crush linen gat you feelin naughty-Crush, in between the papers line- high, Doin just fine- cushal pane-deh pon me mine-
Is it, the lime light-or sun light what shynes-I crample bodies and lock waist lines-Gin&juice?-nah I een gat the time-cuz when-

Crush ice all over ya body-Crush linen gat you feelin naughty-Crush, in between the papers line- high, Doin just fine- cushal pane-deh pon me mine-
Is it, the lime light-or sun light what shynes-I crample bodies and lock waist lines-Gin&juice?-nah nigga I een gat the time-

Am sittin here thinkin what do-should I, crush emcee or roll with you-My name is Gangsta_mal and am a Gangsta fa true
-So that mean before I crush you-I rather Jump In my hoopty and Just rondaivou-

{to be continued}
/Gangsta for life\
for a cause...GO go go go go go
{{{{G-unit}}}}}

q

nah, i don't speak italien. But i do speak
Dutch:P:P

Re§: qwe

mi dispiace but i don't speak english very good!!!!i'm sorry!!!:-(
you speak italian o??
we loves 50 Cent in Italy!!!!!!
he's the kingof the world for me!!!
????

smak....ciao...bye bye..

Not too bad

Keep spitting don't ask for anybodies opinion if nobody likes it spit about what u know. And the bang bang thing is getting old. But whateva. Gangsta gets you either in jail dead or worse disgraced. Keep it real Tinman

2nd one pretty good

u need to be spontanious, cause the 1st rap sounded like it came out ur aynius. the ryhmes u bring are pretty good. but homie y dont u rep ur hood. be proud of were u come from. so people will remeber it wen ur gone. lol ok ill give u a 7. but wen u bring yo next beat take ma ears to heaven.

qwe

and can u translate it to english???

comment - Rate my Rhyme

mmm.devo dire la verità la prima parte è carina ma la seconda un pò meno...comunque complimentiii anche se sicuramente non capirai un cazzo di quello che ti sto scrivendo(come io forse non ho capito un cazzo della seconda strofa!!!) vabbè cmq fa niente tanto 1 cosa in comune la teniamo: 50 Cent!!!! ciaooo

Re: aight

bezdabank wrote:
shits alright i guess i mean da flow would prolly be wack but if you had a decent beat ot would be aight, heres a little tip rap about soem real g shit dere aint no niggas dumb nuff to rob a bank dere only one good song ever bout robbin a bank dats nobody move by eazy and dey get caught in da end rap bout robbin a likka sto e somethin ya kano shit jus go to boogie down bronx and see som dat shit that ill give ya some rhymes

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You snitched me/
You never been a motherfucking G/
You are a copsucker/
And a fackeass fucker/

You snitched me and now you ‘bout to die/
I asked you and you lie/
Here we are you and me/
I got a gun and you are scared to hell/
Did you remember that time in the cluckin’ bell/
That time we robbed that it and took the money/
Man it was damn funny/
We drived a car like never before/
The police on our tail and then we lay down on the flour/
I escaped but you couldn’t escape/
Then I arrived add home and there is a cop like someone with a cape/
I saw him and again I escaped/

You snitched me/
You never been a motherfucking G/
You are a copsucker/
And a fackeass fucker/

I remember a time that we saw us for the first time/
You said that we never snitch one of us/
Now I’m gonna buss you/
I load my gun and shoot you/
Now you’re dead/
With three bullets on your head/
I don’t know were the fuck I now can go to/
The police heard the shots and they’re commin’ fuck it/
I get my gun and shoot me in my head/

You snitched me/
You never been a motherfucking G/
You are a copsucker/
And a fackeass fucker/

please rate this rhyme too.

qwe

aight,

but how can i make a little beat or somthin'?

i live in the netherlands, and i don't know any dj who can make a beat!!!

aight

shits alright i guess i mean da flow would prolly be wack but if you had a decent beat ot would be aight, heres a little tip rap about soem real g shit dere aint no niggas dumb nuff to rob a bank dere only one good song ever bout robbin a bank dats nobody move by eazy and dey get caught in da end rap bout robbin a likka sto e somethin ya kano shit jus go to boogie down bronx and see som dat shit that ill give ya some rhymes

haha

thanks!

Not bad

I'll give it a 5

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mmm...the first part is very good (until jobs...), the second one...mmm...i don't like it!
it's like if...it's not flowing...u know what i mean?
that's what i think!

please

please rate it!!!