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Rate my rhyme

7/15/2007 10:31 PM (GMT-04:00)
Kalia4Ever Kalia4Ever Joined: 7/15/2007 Posts: 1 Location: Commack, Modified, US	Rate my rhyme Quick trigger lock up/ And a bitch nigga shot up/ Rich dreams caught up/ My own friend bought up/ Now I stand over/ With his blood on me/ He hurt real bad/ But his heart still beats/ He coughing up, struggling/ Trying hard to fight it/ But I lift up the hammer/ And in 2 seconds strike it/ Tears down my eyes/ When I think of old times/ Chasing girls in high school/ And dropping em like flies/ Going to the theme parks/ Cutting every single line/ Slapping any nigga/ No matter what his size/ Bumming on the streets/ Till the school time/ Then doing everything over/ Yet one more time/ I miss that life/ I miss you too/ You died for money/ And I died with you/ You stabbed my back/ So I ride on you/ If you asked me once/ I'd die for you/ But as it is now/ I just cry for you/ Quote

7/15/2007 10:31 PM (GMT-04:00)

Kalia4Ever

Kalia4Ever
Joined: 7/15/2007
Posts: 1

Location: Commack, Modified, US

Rate my rhyme

Quick trigger lock up/
And a bitch nigga shot up/
Rich dreams caught up/
My own friend bought up/
Now I stand over/
With his blood on me/
He hurt real bad/
But his heart still beats/
He coughing up, struggling/
Trying hard to fight it/
But I lift up the hammer/
And in 2 seconds strike it/
Tears down my eyes/
When I think of old times/
Chasing girls in high school/
And dropping em like flies/
Going to the theme parks/
Cutting every single line/
Slapping any nigga/
No matter what his size/
Bumming on the streets/
Till the school time/
Then doing everything over/
Yet one more time/
I miss that life/
I miss you too/
You died for money/
And I died with you/
You stabbed my back/
So I ride on you/
If you asked me once/
I'd die for you/
But as it is now/
I just cry for you/

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7/25/2007 1:58 AM (GMT-04:00)
Gangsta_mal Gangsta_mal Joined: 6/12/2007 Posts: 343 Location: Nassau, Modified, BS	Nice..poem I'll give a 8 Quote

7/25/2007 1:58 AM (GMT-04:00)

Gangsta_mal

Gangsta_mal
Joined: 6/12/2007
Posts: 343
Location: Nassau, Modified, BS

Nice..poem

I'll give a 8

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7/25/2007 1:58 AM (GMT-04:00)
Gangsta_mal Gangsta_mal Joined: 6/12/2007 Posts: 343 Location: Nassau, Modified, BS	Nice..poem I'll give a 8 Quote

7/25/2007 1:58 AM (GMT-04:00)

Gangsta_mal

Gangsta_mal
Joined: 6/12/2007
Posts: 343
Location: Nassau, Modified, BS

Nice..poem

I'll give a 8

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7/25/2007 12:38 AM (GMT-04:00)
FiFtYgIrLsoldier FiFtYgIrLsoldier Joined: 12/31/2006 Posts: 53 Location: south, Modified, IT	Re: Rate my rhyme so sad man...Anyway i really like ur rhymes...i'm so happy when somebody writes rhymes like these...cos nowadays everybody just talks about cars, bitches and money...so congratulation! Quote

7/25/2007 12:38 AM (GMT-04:00)

FiFtYgIrLsoldier

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Joined: 12/31/2006
Posts: 53
Location: south, Modified, IT

Re: Rate my rhyme

so sad man...Anyway i really like ur rhymes...i'm so happy when somebody writes rhymes like these...cos nowadays everybody just talks about cars, bitches and money...so congratulation!

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